Just found your essay, read it through once, and your writing is better than ever. But it is night here and I must sleep and dream, but you raise some really interesting topics. Let me spend the weekend mulling it over. All the best to you and yours!
Thank you, I look forward to hearing your thoughts. In the meantime, I’ve downloaded your playlist and will listen to it tomorrow as I work (wait for it) more tenons and mortises.
I did read it yesterday evening and thought about it, though not sure I totally understood. My takeaway is that perhaps my essay came off as overstuffed and convoluted because it contained too many ideas shared at only a surface level? I used to have a writing group I shared my work with but now it’s just me, scribbling notes and attempting to come to some clarity in my own mind about things. Probably my writing has suffered from that. Anyway, I hope you are well 😊
Just found your essay, read it through once, and your writing is better than ever. But it is night here and I must sleep and dream, but you raise some really interesting topics. Let me spend the weekend mulling it over. All the best to you and yours!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xPe5ZQx0OpQ&list=RDjvLtyyBRITo&index=6
Thank you, I look forward to hearing your thoughts. In the meantime, I’ve downloaded your playlist and will listen to it tomorrow as I work (wait for it) more tenons and mortises.
I have deleted yesterday's comment, it was too personal and frankly all over the place. I'll try again and see if I can't do better.
I did read it yesterday evening and thought about it, though not sure I totally understood. My takeaway is that perhaps my essay came off as overstuffed and convoluted because it contained too many ideas shared at only a surface level? I used to have a writing group I shared my work with but now it’s just me, scribbling notes and attempting to come to some clarity in my own mind about things. Probably my writing has suffered from that. Anyway, I hope you are well 😊